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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...tvboxnow.com# C3 x( E3 [  L" f* i" D# n5 g
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: @+ z. o" a1 t! `公仔箱論壇If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?TVBNOW 含有熱門話題，最新最快電視，軟體，遊戲，電影，動漫及日常生活及興趣交流等資訊。+ U; ^" K+ g$ J6 u

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If I go inthe deep of the night, will you walk with me under the pale moon light? 7 k& z2 h- M+ W6 P1 w9 S
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Where I mayend up on this journey, I do not know, but my heart is elated by the wonders Ihave seen along the way...and the love that I feel for you, will be my compasson this quest.
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A Path Less Traveled
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul
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If I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..公仔箱論壇) i' U0 x4 l/ b) U' B% n
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And if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...
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