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A Path Less Traveled
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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknowntvb now,tvbnow,bttvb  \* l; h0 m( b/ J0 M# }  p- b3 l* n
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Chasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soultvb now,tvbnow,bttvb. J' E8 e4 G. k

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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" t- j. J9 R( U) F5 e- o! cIf I goduring the chill of winter, will I see your reflection in an ice crystalshanging from the branch of a pine tree?
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. z3 N, w! h( w5 O  K" {" r7 J2 Btvb now,tvbnow,bttvbAnd if Iwalk under the torturing summer sun, the love I have for you in my heart is myshade and my shelter...4 Z4 s# f- B! n" O: F0 O% z- P
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If I travel atdawn, would I feel your presence on the petal of a pink rose, moisten by themorning dew?: B- b, a! Q' d$ i4 j: E2 |

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A Path Less Traveledtvboxnow.com$ O6 f4 O( n. G. c3 h; @2 {

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I am embarkingon a journey on a path less traveled, destination unknown/ L5 C0 b1 T9 l! K& c: T7 |5 }( {7 |
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. g: j8 J# i' C# ZChasingafter a shadow of exquisite beauty that envelopes the very core of my soul  W  d0 D/ T; I- B& q

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If I travelduring the spring time, I would save all the fallen petals of a cherry blossomin a silver box for you
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What if Ipass through, in late Autumn, the tapestry of colors of the maple leaves paleagainst the sunset in your eyes..
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